the chopper bit was the funniest in my opinion.
i would recommend buying a tablet ASAP. your animation would've only taken a week to do and it would've looked even better.
the self-aware simplicity and nonsensical dialogue is what makes this funny. it only got poor ratings because people didn't understand the joke.
but i sense the passion! i can smell the sweat of the 3 hard years of dedicated work that brought this fantastic drama masterpiece into being. you sir, have brought tears to this wrinkly child's eyes.
i really liked it, but i would've given you a higher score if you had just left out the "awesome business". it didn't need any kind of connection to ego's work, honestly. your material and timing was good. i think if you were to draw the characters more originally, you'd get the respect you deserve.
you're good, dude.
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