eh well
seems like you're trying too hard to be weird and different instead of just going with what you feel. if there really is a message behind of all it, it was muddled by the over-excessive need to be strange. the quote before the Pink Floyd reference was unintelligible.
by the way, this is not surreal at all. this is an ABSTRACT piece. surreal would have no definition and all images would be interpreted by the mood and atmosphere, even sounds.
i give you kudos for the effort, but this piece really felt forced in my opinion.